Drafting Our Writing

Who: The dog barked.

What: The dog barked in fear.

When: As Night fell, the dog barked in fear.

Where: As night fell, the dog barked in fear trying to escape from the cage.

Why: As night passed, the dog barked in fear trying to escape from the cage and trying to find his owner.

As night passed, the dog barked in fear trying to escape from the cage, and trying to find his owner




This is our writing for today. We are learning to proof read by using draft. Draft is an acronym. DRAFT means. Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix and Talk. This was a collaborative DLO. I worked with Halaiano.