It would never had happened, if she hadn’t been late for exams. First and foremost she ate walnuts which secretly had a massive allergic reaction to her self-esteem, and the worst thing that happened during the rush hour, was that parent’s car broke down in the middle of the highway early in the morning. The sad thing was her teacher stared as he drove past in his white sedan.She was shocked with fear when her teacher braked and exited his car with unpleasant. She had already known something terrible would happen.
She was in grief with the horrible actions which ruined her chances of getting the role of prefect. An hour had gone and she gazed into the foggy smoke and looked very emotional when her best friend drove past her in no mood of stopping. Sweat drenched her shirt, as she walked towards her college. She walked into her class when the test came to absurd finish. She was stunned, when her teacher told her that was a practice test for the actual exam. She was so relieved when she heard the news.
“Can Lisa please report to the reception” said the principle through the speakers. Lisa felt so embarrassed when her name got called out. Her heart was racing like the flash. “ Mrs Kennedy is waiting for Lisa Fitzgerald.” Joan groaned. Lisa walked into the office and looked at the ground. She thought she was in a lot of trouble but she thought wrong. Lisa had a bad feeling that she was going to be expelled because she thought she had missed the exams. She knew that this wouldn’t of happened, if she didn’t come late.
This is our narrative that we had to do for writing with Mrs Anderson. This is the narrative that Pote and I collaboratively made. We had a sentence starter and that was "It would never had happened, if she hadn’t been late". First we had to expand the sentence starter with an extra 5 sentences.
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